Thursday, October 22, 2009

Wish I was here

Decided to just do a little free write from this picture.




stone like skin
wood like bone

here in this place
I want to rest
listen only to water
and wind

let my worries
flow away like leaves
carried downstream

watercourse
vein
tear

kiss of stone
scratch of wood

5 comments:

Craig Sorensen said...

Ah...

You captured the setting beautifully.

Mind if I join in?


River
beneath my limbs

falling
my leaves

Shall I ever know
where they go?

listen

tumbling water
refreshes my roots

rushes by...

Erobintica said...

Craig, be my guest - thanks. I like "falling/my leaves" - it sounds really nice out loud.

Emerald said...

Lovely! Thanks Robin.

And thanks Craig too!

Scarlett Greyson said...

Oh thank you Robin for both the image and the words, and thank you to Craig too :)

Secretia said...

You are there in your mind's eye. It is lovely!