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Thursday, October 22, 2009

Wish I was here

Decided to just do a little free write from this picture.




stone like skin
wood like bone

here in this place
I want to rest
listen only to water
and wind

let my worries
flow away like leaves
carried downstream

watercourse
vein
tear

kiss of stone
scratch of wood

at

5 comments:

  1. Craig SorensenOctober 23, 2009 at 5:06 AM

    Ah...

    You captured the setting beautifully.

    Mind if I join in?


    River
    beneath my limbs

    falling
    my leaves

    Shall I ever know
    where they go?

    listen

    tumbling water
    refreshes my roots

    rushes by...

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  2. ErobinticaOctober 23, 2009 at 1:20 PM

    Craig, be my guest - thanks. I like "falling/my leaves" - it sounds really nice out loud.

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  3. EmeraldOctober 23, 2009 at 4:11 PM

    Lovely! Thanks Robin.

    And thanks Craig too!

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  4. Scarlett GreysonOctober 24, 2009 at 6:12 AM

    Oh thank you Robin for both the image and the words, and thank you to Craig too :)

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  5. AnonymousOctober 24, 2009 at 10:14 AM

    You are there in your mind's eye. It is lovely!

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